Monday, December 3, 2007

Nowhere left to run...

Walking in shadows,
Across dead brown meadows,
Lone on a hebetic path
nowhere left to run...

11 comments:

Rajarshi said...

A contradictory kinda poem huh?...but u aint alone.ur shadow is with u.*aaarrgghh*.nice to see u postin after a loooong tym.

Rajarshi said...

Wat duz hebetic mean neway....i hv heard of heretic

Wielder of Rotten Tomatoes said...

Hebetic actually means of or relating to puberty, youthful. I have used it here as a synonym for fertile.

You should probably re-read it now. It's a very transparent poem. Not much imagination.

Me said...

thanks.
n don't we all want our very own gay best friends??
:)

Malavika said...

brilliant!

dranz3r said...

ummm....who r u running from then??? if u r alone.....which u r not.....


and ya all taht for a girl.....like wt u posted on my blog....

http://alwaysurluv.blogspot.com

Wielder of Rotten Tomatoes said...

@b!ack-dranz3r: This isn't about a girl. And I don't understand what you mean by "if you are alone, which you are not"! But feel free to make your own interpretations.

dranz3r said...

the comment abt the girl was reply to the comment u posted on my blog...... and u arent alone cuz ur shadow is styl with u....!!!!

Wielder of Rotten Tomatoes said...

@Black-Danzer: Just because I have a shadow does not mean I am not alone. That is but one way to interpret the poem. This isn't something Green Day wrote.

I just don't understand why people assume a shadow to be an entire entity. It can neither speak nor reciprocate!

dranz3r said...

but at least a shadow gives u company which strengthens u emotionally.....and ya......u might have written it in some other way.... my meaning might be different from yours.......

Thanatos said...

Steps taken forwards but sleepwalking back again...
Dragged by the force of some inner tide

Reminded me of that song, somehow.